Good, but give credit where credit is due.
This was executed very well, but he first two scenes were obviously from VG cats. Normally, this wouldn't be a problem, as putting comics in a flash medium allows for a wider audience. However, you failed to aknowledge both Scott Ramsomir (the author) AND VGcats, and you deliberatly replaced the VGcats characters with your own. It was entertaining, but if it was a little more original (and longer), this would've been front-page worthy.